I wish I could write as well as my 12 year old daughter

Cinderella looked down at her feet. A hot tear ran down to the tip of her nose. She shook her head, no. The tear rolled off her nose and left a splattered mark on the floor. "Oh, and Cinderella- you missed a spot!" Stepmother said motioning to the spot on the floor.

Her whole re-telling of the classic story is here.